*** is such a frustrating self-obsessed annoying terrible person but maintains enough realistic pathos to be completely believable and real, though I do wish she had at least some likable traits to make her a bit messier than just a straightforward villain. She's boring not in a "lack of interesting writing" way but in the way terrible abusive people often are, nothing real going on inside just a twisted mess of selfish surface level desire, a black hole with nothing at the center. I enjoyed the way the narrative almost doms the reader, forcing you along with ***'s terrible actions, giving you false choices to force you to do the obviously wrong thing, making you give up control to someone so obviously abusive.
The art, the staging and the music, all create a unique and unsettling aesthetic. It makes the already great narration so impactful. The subjects you chose to talk about in the game truely hits me deeply, congrats for adressing such hard topics this way !
Amazing job to the team, and thank you for letting me playtest it !
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*** is such a frustrating self-obsessed annoying terrible person but maintains enough realistic pathos to be completely believable and real, though I do wish she had at least some likable traits to make her a bit messier than just a straightforward villain. She's boring not in a "lack of interesting writing" way but in the way terrible abusive people often are, nothing real going on inside just a twisted mess of selfish surface level desire, a black hole with nothing at the center. I enjoyed the way the narrative almost doms the reader, forcing you along with ***'s terrible actions, giving you false choices to force you to do the obviously wrong thing, making you give up control to someone so obviously abusive.
The art, the staging and the music, all create a unique and unsettling aesthetic.
It makes the already great narration so impactful. The subjects you chose to talk about in the game truely hits me deeply, congrats for adressing such hard topics this way !
Amazing job to the team, and thank you for letting me playtest it !
Thank you for this, the art is BEAUTIFUL!
im obsessed with the narrator-- bickering with me constantly and up and leaving when i'm too much of an asshole, its great.
and man. "i" sure am an asshole!!!!
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I'm glad you liked our narrator!
She wasn't part of the plan, but she suddenly appeared when I started writing, and she quickly became the backbone of the story.
I believe she's the one making this whole affair bearable...